OUTLINE
I.- INTRODUCTION
a) Where is it?
b) When and why did I go there?
c) How is it?
d) Thesis Statement
II.- BODY PARAGRAPH 1
a) What can you find? (Sight)
1) Nature
2) Waterfalls and Rivers
3) “Rodilla del Diablo”
III.- BODY PARAGRAPH 2
a) What can you hear? (Hearing)
1) Waterfalls’ sound
2) The singing of the birds
3) The air around the trees
b) What can you smell? (Smell)
1) The smell of food
2) The smell of the green areas
IV.- BODY PARAGRAPH 3
a) What can you feel?
1) Waterfalls’ breeze
2) The clean and fresh air
3) Different emotions
V.- CONCLUSION
a) Restate Thesis
b) Restate each Topic (Description of what you can see, hear, smell and feel while you are in the park)
c) My personal opinion about the park
d) Final statement
ESSAY
Have you ever heard about the amazing Uruapan Park? Mexico has different states where you can find wonderful things, but I love the Uruapan Park which is in Uruapan Michoacan. I went there on March 21st 2006 when I was in high school because my classmates, my tutor and I organized a trip to visit Michoacan and that park was the place I liked the most. It is a huge place which is full of nature and legends about some areas of the park. There are many reasons why you should visit the Uruapan Park, but if you cannot, you just have to imagine what you are going to read and you will be there.
The first reason is that since the moment you come into the park, you will see astonishing places. Imagine that you are walking in an enormous place and you see a lot of nature like gigantic trees and a lot of flowers and if you look at the sky, the sun’s rays are soft and they cannot damage your skin because the trees take care of you. Through the way, you will see wonderful waterfalls and little rivers which look like milk because the water is white and they are falling down from a big mountain. Moreover, you will observe small and big fountains with a lot of birds and it is the moment in which you think that the place has been touched by God because you never forget that image that is beautiful. At the end of the path, you will know the famous “Rodilla del Diablo” which is located in the “Cupatitzo” River, but most people call it, “El rio que canta” because some of the water flows there. The “Rodilla del Diablo” is like a hole in a stone because the legend says that the devil appeared there and one day he fell and he could not move his knee from the stone.
The second reason to visit the park is that you have to know the sound and smell of certain things because you will never do that in another place. The first thing you will hear is the sound of the waterfalls which is a melody for the ears because it gives you peace. Another thing is the singing of the birds that is like a sweet song that fills your soul of happiness; moreover, the air around the trees is like a echo of a symphony that transmits you energy and the movements of the leafs transport you to the paradise. Talking about odors, you will smell the tasty food that some people sell along the road and it is something special because in Michoacan people season the food in a different way. The smell of the green areas relaxes your body and changes your humor since you will start feeling different things on the road.
The last reason and the most important for me is what you can feel when you are in contact with something in the park. For example: while you are walking near the waterfalls, the breeze touches your face and you feel that God is around you and he is blessing you; in other words, you will think that you are in the heaven. The fresh and clean air runs from one place to another; through your noise you will breathe and fill your lungs of oxygen and it will make you feel good. You can also experiment different emotions while you are looking, hearing or smelling something. You will remember some past memories that can be good or bad, but what it is true is that this park has the power to change your feelings.
You have to visit the Uruapan Park because there are many things you can experiment there. You can observe many things such as nature, waterfalls and little rivers, and the famous “Rodilla del Diablo”; you can also hear different sound like the waterfalls’ sounds, the singing of the birds and the air and while you walk, you will smell the food and the odor of the green areas. Finally, you can feel the waterfalls’ breeze, the air and different emotions which are very important. In my opinion, this is a wonderful park because you are in a paradise. If you have the opportunity, you should go to visit the Uruapan Park.
I.- INTRODUCTION
a) Where is it?
b) When and why did I go there?
c) How is it?
d) Thesis Statement
II.- BODY PARAGRAPH 1
a) What can you find? (Sight)
1) Nature
2) Waterfalls and Rivers
3) “Rodilla del Diablo”
III.- BODY PARAGRAPH 2
a) What can you hear? (Hearing)
1) Waterfalls’ sound
2) The singing of the birds
3) The air around the trees
b) What can you smell? (Smell)
1) The smell of food
2) The smell of the green areas
IV.- BODY PARAGRAPH 3
a) What can you feel?
1) Waterfalls’ breeze
2) The clean and fresh air
3) Different emotions
V.- CONCLUSION
a) Restate Thesis
b) Restate each Topic (Description of what you can see, hear, smell and feel while you are in the park)
c) My personal opinion about the park
d) Final statement
ESSAY
Have you ever heard about the amazing Uruapan Park? Mexico has different states where you can find wonderful things, but I love the Uruapan Park which is in Uruapan Michoacan. I went there on March 21st 2006 when I was in high school because my classmates, my tutor and I organized a trip to visit Michoacan and that park was the place I liked the most. It is a huge place which is full of nature and legends about some areas of the park. There are many reasons why you should visit the Uruapan Park, but if you cannot, you just have to imagine what you are going to read and you will be there.
The first reason is that since the moment you come into the park, you will see astonishing places. Imagine that you are walking in an enormous place and you see a lot of nature like gigantic trees and a lot of flowers and if you look at the sky, the sun’s rays are soft and they cannot damage your skin because the trees take care of you. Through the way, you will see wonderful waterfalls and little rivers which look like milk because the water is white and they are falling down from a big mountain. Moreover, you will observe small and big fountains with a lot of birds and it is the moment in which you think that the place has been touched by God because you never forget that image that is beautiful. At the end of the path, you will know the famous “Rodilla del Diablo” which is located in the “Cupatitzo” River, but most people call it, “El rio que canta” because some of the water flows there. The “Rodilla del Diablo” is like a hole in a stone because the legend says that the devil appeared there and one day he fell and he could not move his knee from the stone.
The second reason to visit the park is that you have to know the sound and smell of certain things because you will never do that in another place. The first thing you will hear is the sound of the waterfalls which is a melody for the ears because it gives you peace. Another thing is the singing of the birds that is like a sweet song that fills your soul of happiness; moreover, the air around the trees is like a echo of a symphony that transmits you energy and the movements of the leafs transport you to the paradise. Talking about odors, you will smell the tasty food that some people sell along the road and it is something special because in Michoacan people season the food in a different way. The smell of the green areas relaxes your body and changes your humor since you will start feeling different things on the road.
The last reason and the most important for me is what you can feel when you are in contact with something in the park. For example: while you are walking near the waterfalls, the breeze touches your face and you feel that God is around you and he is blessing you; in other words, you will think that you are in the heaven. The fresh and clean air runs from one place to another; through your noise you will breathe and fill your lungs of oxygen and it will make you feel good. You can also experiment different emotions while you are looking, hearing or smelling something. You will remember some past memories that can be good or bad, but what it is true is that this park has the power to change your feelings.
You have to visit the Uruapan Park because there are many things you can experiment there. You can observe many things such as nature, waterfalls and little rivers, and the famous “Rodilla del Diablo”; you can also hear different sound like the waterfalls’ sounds, the singing of the birds and the air and while you walk, you will smell the food and the odor of the green areas. Finally, you can feel the waterfalls’ breeze, the air and different emotions which are very important. In my opinion, this is a wonderful park because you are in a paradise. If you have the opportunity, you should go to visit the Uruapan Park.
VERONICA DIAZ LOPEZ
THIRD ESSAY
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